地图题
The maps illustrate how the area will be changed in the future. (开头直接表明写作目的)
At present，【决定本段时态】 the building， with the main entrance towards the north(门是建筑一部分作为次要信息进行展示)， is located in the Northwestern corner. In the center of the building is a reception.(倒装句，考试加分亮点)【建筑物的位置&建筑物的中心地带】 In the front and at the left to the reception there are three meeting rooms while at the right one art room and IT room are seen. The remainder of the area is a car park with an entrance in the north. (注意门的变化)
【将来时】However， in the future (表示上下发生明显变化)the building will be expanded to nearly a half of the area， located in the west， which is as large as the car park in the east.(使用东西南北表方向的原因与地图的指示图标相关，故楼外描述用东南西北，楼内使用左右) With the entrance of building toward the east， the reception will be smaller， there will be two more – 注意新加建筑one care and one gym rooms in the left and one of the meeting rooms will be reduced. Noticeably， a garden will be created in the north to the building.
Overall， the maps show that teaching areas will be enlarged while (表示对比) car park will be shrunk， which may be caused by the higher requirement for teaching places. (推测利用从句表示)
流程图
【表明目的】The diagram illustrates (图表中表示展示) how a home smokery is constructed 词汇替换and how it is used.
【总分结构】There are three pits dug表示此为人为过程 which are connected with pipes. The first pit is used for storing air， covered with a lid；分号表示对3个坑的分别描述in the second pit with a lid， some logs are piled 动词的灵活使用 and being burned； and the last pit is paved with bricks at the bottom【静态描述】， and at the top of a box above it some fish and meats are hanged. 【1-概括坑的数量；2-坑的具体描述；3-坑的差异】
【过程的解释】When the air is blown in the first pit with the lid open， it passes the pipe and keeps the fire burning the logs. The heat produced and smoke is through the pipe into the third pit， where it is penetrating the bricks and smoking the hanged fish and pork. 【分句体现对题目的理解】
【最终的结论】Overall， the diagram shows that the smokery can be created in a very simple process (对生产过程的评价)and smoked fish and meats can be produced in the way.